I read it again just now and it's the most perfect fill for my art prompt, it's like you have hacked my brain or something :D
Counting down from 10 to 0, Neal's gradually increasing grief and despair and Peter's growing fear and determination in finding Neal, and all that combined with glimpses of past mistakes and regrets and current hopes and desires - it creates such an amazing feel to the entire story, from the very beginning to the very end :D ♥
Awww, the epilogue made my heart break a little :P It was such a difficult talk between Peter and Neal, but I wouldn't want it any other way, they can't move forward without dealing with the past, however painful that is. I actually have no doubt that after making that first difficult step, they will work it out and have their happily ever after ♥
THANK YOU so much for writing this, I was so ridiculously excited when you claimed that prompt and now my squee is infinite :D Heee :D Thank you :D
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Date: 2014-04-27 10:11 am (UTC)I read it again just now and it's the most perfect fill for my art prompt, it's like you have hacked my brain or something :D
Counting down from 10 to 0, Neal's gradually increasing grief and despair and Peter's growing fear and determination in finding Neal, and all that combined with glimpses of past mistakes and regrets and current hopes and desires - it creates such an amazing feel to the entire story, from the very beginning to the very end :D ♥
Awww, the epilogue made my heart break a little :P It was such a difficult talk between Peter and Neal, but I wouldn't want it any other way, they can't move forward without dealing with the past, however painful that is. I actually have no doubt that after making that first difficult step, they will work it out and have their happily ever after ♥
THANK YOU so much for writing this, I was so ridiculously excited when you claimed that prompt and now my squee is infinite :D Heee :D Thank you :D